Meta, Meta Winner!

Sep
2010

Thanks to everyone who posted on A.J.’s funny, insightful, and all-too-real “Passing the Time on Submission” post! She picked a winner at random, and you won’t believe who won. In fact, I’ll let A.J. do the honors:

I had my husband pull a name out of a hat, and the winner of the free book is…..Sophie Littlefield!  (I swear, I didn’t set this up.)  Sophie, would you like Wicked Lovely, Tracking the Tempest, or, um, A Bad Day for Pretty?  Email me your choice (ajlarrieu [at] me [dot] com), and I’ll get it to you ASAP!

Thanks again to everyone who commented and stopped by help4writers!

Today, in our ongoing thread about how to pass the time while your work is out to agents and editors, author A.J. Larrieu offers tips on self-distraction.

A.J. was born and raised in southern Louisiana.  She was torn between studying biology and English in college, so she compromised by getting a degree in biochemistry and writing on the side.  Ten years later she’s still leading a double life.  She writes urban fantasy set in the South and in the San Francisco Bay Area, where she currently lives.  She is represented by Sarah LaPolla at Curtis Brown, Ltd.  Her first novel is currently on submission.  You can visit her at www.ajlarrieu.com and, what’s more, you can win prizes by commenting on this post! See how below!

Take it away, A.J.!

Most of the time, I’m a functioning adult.  I can make my own lunch and get myself up in the morning, and I don’t require midday naps (as long as I’ve had my coffee).  But waiting to hear back from editors turns me into a kindergartener.  If I don’t keep my brain constantly distracted, it runs off on its own and gets in to all sorts of psychological trouble.  Why haven’t I heard anything?  (Cue hours of fruitless Google-stalking of publishing imprints and author bulletin boards.)  Oh God, I’ll never get published… (Cue unhealthy levels of chocolate consumption.)  You all know how it goes, right?  I have to keep myself distracted, or I’ll lose my mind.

Distraction One: Writing.

Right now I’m waiting to hear back from editors on Book One of a proposed series, so I’m optimistically working away on Book Two.  For obvious reasons, this isn’t always an adequate distraction.  When I feel myself slipping into the Anxiety Death Spiral, I take a break from book-writing and write honest-to-goodness pen-and-paper letters to friends.  It’s a great way to procrastinate because it takes longer than typing.  And they write me back!  It’s nice to get something in the mail and know before I open it that it won’t be a rejection.

Distraction Two: Reading

But not just any reading.  Everyone’s heard of the second-book-blues, and now I think I get why they exist.  It’s definitely a challenge to write the second book before the first one sells, and if I’m lucky enough to have a deadline in the future, I’m sure it’ll only get harder.  In an attempt to avoid “the sophomore slump,” I’ve been reading other authors’ Book Twos with a critical eye.  Are they successful?  Why or why not?  If they’re writing a series, how did they keep the tension and conflict fresh?  The Book Twos on my list right now are Melissa Marr’s Ink Exchange, Nicole Peeler’s Tracking the Tempest, and Sophie Littlefield’s A Bad Day for Pretty. Since all of these ladies are very talented, I’ve been picking up a ton of inspiration.

Distraction Three: Running Away

A couple of weeks after my agent sent out my first round of submissions, I went on vacation to Italy.  I was lucky: I’d planned the vacation months before, and it fell at the perfect time.  There’s nothing like sitting by a pool in Tuscany with a bottle of chilled wine to make you forget your worries.  That, and I only had sporadic email access.  I won’t be able to use this method for every submission—I’ll be lucky if I ever get to go to Italy again—but there are easier ways to run away than hopping on planes to foreign countries.  Visit a part of your city you’ve never seen.  Go sit in a park or a coffee shop without your laptop/notebook.  Cut yourself off.  I’ve come back from my trip a lot less obsessive, mostly because I got out of the habit of checking my email every five minutes.  I give it another week before I start hovering again, but right now, it’s kind of nice that my “new email!” alert on my phone no longer wakes me up out of a dead sleep.

How do you pass the time while you’re waiting?  One lucky commenter will get a copy of one of the “Books Twos” I’m reading as distraction!

Genre Jumping

Aug
2010

Eileen Cook is the author of the young-adult novels WHAT WOULD EMMA DO? and GETTING REVENGE ON LAUREN WOOD, and the romance UNPREDICTABLE. She is prolific, talented, and understands that some writers just don’t fit inside a single genre box. In this guest post, Eileen offers tips on how to successfully navigate between genres — without feeling schizophrenic. Take it away, Eileen!

I write women’s fiction. And young adult novels. And some middle grade. Some of my work is romantic comedy, some paranormal, and there is some drama thrown in here and there.

I’m a genre jumper.  It isn’t that I can’t make up my mind, I write in multiple genres because I enjoy it.  More and more writers are crossing genre borders. NY Times bestselling author Carl Hiaasen writes crime fiction, non-fiction and won the Newberry award when he turned to writing middle grade novels. Children’s favorite Judy Blume also writes women’s fiction. Romance author Nora Roberts writes paranormals, traditional romance, and suspense.

If you’re thinking of trying out a new genre here are some disadvantages and advantages to keep in mind.

Disadvantages:

Practice makes Perfect:

Every genre has its own framework. In romance the reader expects a happy ending. In a mystery, the reader won’t be happy if you solve the “who done it” by introducing a new character on the final page. The more you write in a specific genre the more opportunity you’ll have to develop skills and understand reader demands.  If you divide your energy among different genres it may take you longer to master the nuances of each one.

Fractured Base:

Everyone wants to have the break out book, the book everyone is reading. However, most authors are a slow build. It takes time, and books, to build an established reader base. If you are changing genre it can also mean building that reader base all over again. You may have some crossover readers, but you shouldn’t count on your mystery readers loving your new sci-fi adventure.

Who are you?

Writing is a craft, but publishing is a business. Publishers often talk about your “brand” as a writer. Readers have expectations of writers. If they pick up a Stephen King novel they expect it to be scary. If he wrote a romance, readers would keep turning the pages waiting for the main character to have their brain eaten by a mutant zombie.  If your write in different genres you run the risk that you “dilute” your brand. For this reason many writers who genre jump use a pen name, not to hide their identity, but rather to clearly brand the type of book the reader can expect.

Advantages:

Stretch that Muse:

Writing in a new genre can be freeing. You get to stretch out to try new formats. A new genre may be different lengths, different expectations with POV, and if you’re trying out paranormal, fantasy or science fiction, you have a chance to create entire new worlds.

Bang for your Story Buck

You may have a great idea for a story or a theme that you want to explore, but you realize that telling it within the context of a different genre will give it more “oomph.”

Reinvention/Changing Marketplace

Publishing trends come and go. (Anyone remember the sea of pink book covers during the chick lit boom?) If the genre you write in has come to the end of its trend you may not be able to sell. You either have to wait until your genre comes back into popularity, or you need to venture out into new waters.

Genre jumping doesn’t mean that you have writing commitment issues. There are advantages and disadvantages to crossing genre borders- but don’t be afraid to give it a try.  There’s a whole writing world waiting to be explored.

To learn more about Eileen’s books, click here. You can also follow her on Twitter @eileenwriter

When your book is with a publisher, it will go through two types of editing. First, the big changes roll in with notes like “show me more about this character’s past” or “pick up the pacing in chapter three.” When writers say they are “working with their editor” it usually means on these large-scale changes. Which are no mean feat.

These changes are usually outlined in editing letters, which are typed up notes, in addition to line edits on the manuscript itself.

Then, once you and your editor have navigated all the big changes successfully, your manuscript goes in for copyedits. This is when a second editor — usually someone the writer never meets or emails with — fixes any remaining typos, makes sure Wisconsin really is America’s Dairyland, puts in all the missing commas, etc. These changes don’t come with a letter — only marks on the manuscript.

The practice of having two different kinds of editors look at your manuscript is as helpful for published writers as it is for non-published writers. Who is looking at your manuscript and what is their skill set? If perhaps one of your reviewers is spending a little too much time on the typos and not enough time on the bigger-picture elements, or vice versa, it might be time to get a new set of eyes on your work.

How do you feel about inviting other people into the editing process? What’s worked for you?

[Image Source: Mark Watlz]

It’s the age-old question. How much will I get for my book if it sells?

First, for those who might not know, an advance is the money your publisher gives you up front for your book. It counts against your royalties, so you have to earn it back in sales.

Which means there are a couple of ways to look at advances. I mean, we all want that six-figure (or seven-figure) contract for our book. But the thing is, if you get a huge advance, you have to sell a crapload of books to earn it back, and that can be downright stressful. In the case of Charles Frazier’s second book, Thirteen Moons, he got an $8-million advance, and I think he’ll probably be paying it off for the rest of his life. The book didn’t do so hot. Bummer for him. Granted, he still got $8 million, but next time around? Who knows. He’ll be lucky if his publisher still wants to work with him.

Then there’s the other category of books that get some money upfront, but then sell really well and earn out their advances. The author is earning royalties in his/her sleep. Like J.K. Rowling, for example.

So what can be expected? What’s normal for a book?

Well, when it looked like I might get an offer on Donut Days, I asked my agent this same question: What did she expect the offer would look like if it came in? Her response was that it’s almost impossible to tell.  At the time I was disappointed with the answer but now I know, she’s right — every book is different. What’s more, there has been some question about shrinking advances now that so many book publishers are having a hard time financially. I talked to a writer friend recently who had almost finished a contracted manuscript, only to have the book publisher pull the title and say they weren’t going to publish it.

That said, books are still being sold to publishers, and advances are still being given out. And there are some benchmarks.

A Google search turned up the page of Tobias S. Buckell and his survey information on advances. He breaks down the data (culled from 108 authors) in great ways, such as those authors who are agented versus not, and also by genre. Very smart guy.

Author Justine Larbaleister also offers some general advance info on her website.

The bottom line is it all depends on what you’re writing, if it’s a first novel, if you’re agented … a host of things. The websites above offer some good data and you can probably guess where you’ll hit on the spectrum. Just don’t bank on it until your check is in hand.

[Image Source: Diane Chamberlain. Also, in finding this image, I also discovered Diane has a great post on how she gets asked all the time as a writer about how much she makes. It's worth the read!]

The Rule of Ten

Jul
2010

How many rejection letters should you open before you decide it’s time to change course?

My rule is ten.

Now, before I go into details here, please know that there are no hard and fast rules when it comes to rejection letters. Only guidelines. But here’s why I think ten is a good number.

At ten, you’re getting a message that something isn’t working. Perhaps it’s your query. If the agent or editor has requested a partial and/or full and passed, then you know your manuscript might have problems. Ten is a warning, but not a white surrender flag.

At ten, you can make changes and then either re-submit the manuscript to an agent you really want to work with (assuming they’re okay with that) or branch out to a new agency.

At ten, you haven’t exhausted the list of agents out there whom you might work with. Ten gives you breathing room to submit to new folks after some have passed.

At ten, your inbox isn’t over capacity with messages saying “we don’t want what you wrote.”

Of course, as I noted, this doesn’t work for everyone. In this interview, author and agent Mandy Hubbard talks about how discouraged she got when she hit rejection 20. Nowadays, her book, PRADA AND PREJUDICE, is a huge bestseller. I’ve already blogged about how many great authors received a host of rejection letters, ignored them, and kept going.

Do you have a rule of thumb for rejection letters? What’s your submission process been like?

Writers are told over and over to write what they know.

But in addition to putting on paper an experience, or a familiar dialect, or a particular event, writers might also take the time to get to know themselves.

Why? Because you living with your manuscript is a lot like a marriage and, trust me, there are going to be times you have to stick by that thing when you’d rather throw it out the window and walk away. Like any relationship that has a chance of succeeding, it’s important to start it off with a good foundation. And part of that good foundation is making sure that you’ve looked internally a bit and outlined what it is that would you would find most fulfilling to write about — not terribly dissimilar to how you might craft a little paragraph about yourself for a dating website and think about the kind of person you want to attract.

The burgeoning field of positive psychology has a lot to say about how we pinpoint our strengths and dig into what makes us happy. The website www.authentichappiness.org has great information overall, but specifically they have surveys that help you outline your strengths. < — Heads-up: This link will take you to a login page, where you have to register before you can complete they survey.

It’s just one of many surveys on the site, all designed to help you know a bit more about yourself and what you’re good at. Can’t hurt to consider as you’re typing away on that next book.

[Image Source: Buffalo Blood Donor]

Colleen Newvine Tebeau has a unique skill set that’s one part business guru, and one part creative entrepreneur. She has has a bachelor’s degree in journalism from Central Michigan and an M.B.A. from the University of Michigan. She worked as a reporter and editor at daily, weekly and monthly publications before flipping over to the business side. Today she’s director of market research at the Associated Press in New York. She also has her own blog, Newvine Growing, which is about living life intentionally, and continues to freelance to scratch her writing itch.

All that is to say Colleen gets writing both from a purely imaginative standpoint and from a more practical standpoint.

I asked her to stop by Help for Writers to chat about why mixing the corporate and the creative can be a breakthrough for writers.

Q: What are the three mistakes you see creative types making most frequently when it comes to their work?

That depends on why you write. If it’s just a pleasurable pursuit for you, like playing on a recreational softball team or baking, then you can do it however, whenever it makes you feel good.

I worked my way through college writing for the college newspaper so I always saw writing as a way to earn money. Maybe that’s why I’m always so amazed when I see people recoiling with horror at the thought that they should treat their writing as a business.

Making money from your writing doesn’t sully you as a creative person. It helps you buy groceries, and perhaps lets you spend more timing writing and less time on other things that aren’t writing but that you do to buy groceries.

So number 1 is just recoiling from the thought that writing and business can go together. They can.

Number 2 is not truthfully estimating how much time and expense is going to go into a project and pricing their work accordingly. If you’re willing to invest 20 hours and 50 bucks worth of long-distance calls for a $65 freelance piece, that’s your decision. Maybe you really enjoy the topic and the pleasure you get from it makes it worth it. But it might also be that you haven’t stopped to calculate what you’ll have to invest to do the work and don’t value your own time enough to decide whether it’s worth it.

Number 3 is thinking that as long as you’re talented, you’ll make money. There are loads of talented people in the world not making a dime from their efforts, and plenty of examples of, um, less talented people rolling in dough. Yes you should work on your writing, but if you want to treat it as a business, you can’t neglect the other pieces, like good, consistent marketing or managing your finances well.

Q: What are the benefits to running your creative endeavors like a business?

I’m going to assume that you write because you like writing — fair guess?

If you like writing, chances are you’d like to do it more than lots of other ways you could support yourself.

If you’re willing to treat your creativity as a business, you probably have a better chance of turning it into something that helps support you. If not full time, what if you could write and have a part-time job to supplement your writing?

I think treating your creativity like a business helps justify the time and energy you put into it. It gives it legitimacy as a serious pursuit, not just a hobby you fit into your spare time.

Plus getting a pay check for your writing gives you that feedback we all crave, that someone out there thinks you’re a good writer. It’s excellent validation.

Q. What does it mean to treat your creativity as a business?

Let me use a restaurant as an analogy.

Let’s say you’re a great cook so you open a restaurant. You make great food but you don’t advertise the business because you aren’t interested in marketing, you don’t keep track of your expenses because you aren’t interested in accounting, you don’t hire good employees or train them well because you aren’t interested in organizational behavior.

Do you think your restaurant will success just on the strength of your great food?

Being in any kind of business means you need to work on all aspects of the business, not just the ones you like, if you’re going to succeed.

Novelists, for example, need to do a lot of their own marketing to help sell their books, so it’s as important to have a good website and to organize book events as to write a great book.

The good news is that you don’t have to be great at everything yourself. That cook who opens the restaurant probably hires a bookkeeper, for example. If you can’t afford to pay for help, you can probably find friends who would love help writing a brochure or copy for their website in exchange for their help on your marketing or accounting.

Q: What do you recommend for a writer looking to get organized?

I think the very first step is to figure out what your goal is — is it to write and sell a novel or to become a full-time freelance journalist? Is it to write a few short stories for fun or to become a best-selling author?

Once you figure that out, look for examples of people doing what you want to do and see what you can identify about what they’re doing that you aren’t. Do they have an active e-mail list for their fans? Are they touring the country to support their books? Do they have an agent and a publisher?

If you’re having trouble with this, try reading trade publications like Writers Digest or maybe even talk to some people doing what you’d like to do.

Then make a list of the skills you either need to develop yourself or need to barter for or pay for. Set goals for yourself to take classes, meet people, do whatever you need to do to round out those business skills.

And since my mom was my tax preparer for years, I’ll suggest one good step in getting organized is keeping good records of your expenses. If you’re going to treat your writing as a business, you need to save every receipt and probably get yourself a good accountant who understands self employment to help you get the most benefit from the money you’re spending.

Q: What is one thing every creative type can do today, right now, to increase productivity?

My husband is a painter and he’s borrowed a quote he likes to use often: paintings are never finished, only abandoned.

Working as a daily newspaper writer was great training for calling something finished whether you loved it or not. There was a deadline that wasn’t going to move so you got your story as good as you could before the paper had to go to press.

If you treat your creativity as a business, you start to think of every hour you invest as real money — your time is worth something. So you could probably work on that same story for another month, but would it make you more money to do that? And realistically, you’d still not be 100 percent satisfied with it. None of us ever are.

So I think the one thing you can do is give yourself an amount of time you’re willing to work on something and when you’re done, stop. Instead of working on it twice as long as you need to, put that additional time into something else.

Q: Do you have any good resources for creatives looking to become more business savvy. in addition to your blog and consulting services?

I’d suggest looking for inspiration in business stories in a variety of outlets, not just publications for writers. You might borrow excellent ideas from stories about entrepreneurs, for example, or learn something about marketing from a story about an ad campaign.

Just a sampling of some places you might poke around:

– Harvard Business Review — a great resource on a whole variety of business topics. For example
http://hbr.org/2010/06/managing-yourself-turn-the-job-you-have-into-the-job-you-want/ar/1
http://blogs.hbr.org/bregman/2010/07/how-to-avoid-and-quickly-recov.html

– Paid Content — if you want to know what’s going on in modern publishing, this is a must read
http://paidcontent.org/

– Advertising Age — looking for inspiration on your book’s marketing? Turn off Mad Men and look at what the 21st century ad industry is doing
http://adage.com/

– The Poynter Institute’s leadership and business section — focused reading on the business side of the media
http://www.poynter.org/subject.asp?id=14

Contest Winner

Jul
2010

Thank you to all the people who commented on Rachael Herron’s fabulous post earlier this week. And, we have a winner!

Congratulations Lennette! You win a signed copy of Rachael’s debut novel, HOW TO KNIT A LOVE SONG.

Additional authors will be contributing to the “What to do while your work is on submission” posts down the road, so never fear. There will be lots more prizes and great content to come!

Happy Friday, everyone!

We’ve all been there. You email a query letter, or send out a partial … and then you wait. And wait. And w…a…i…t.

You check email. You check voicemail. You check regular mail. You look at the agent or editor’s status on Twitter. You check email again.

Because it’s happened to all of us, I’m staring a new feature where I talk to authors — some published, some not — who talk about how to pass the time when their works are on submission. The inaugural post is by the delightful Rachael Herron, whose debut novel How to Knit a Love Song is out on bookshelves now and, in fact, is flying off them, what with it being well-reviewed, charming romance and all.

If you’re a writer who knows what the time-dragging infinity of the submission process is like, let us know about it in the comments. One lucky commenter will get a signed copy of How to Knit a Love Song!

And without further ado, take it away, Rachael!

To pass the time while my manuscript was on submission, I knitted little booties for my polydactyl cat Digit who is the heaviest stomping cat in the world. Okay, I didn’t, not really. But those kinds of noises sure got to me, and I thought about doing it. Instead, I cast on for a sweater and knitted every time I wondered what was happening in the world of My Book. Soon, the sweater was done, and I was much warmer sitting at my computer late at night, waiting for the email to drop into my inbox.

To pass the time while my manuscript was on submission, I gave my Blackberry a new, loud tone that signaled every email’s arrival. It went from a subtle ding to a brassy doorbell. Every single time the doorbell rang, I pictured, just for a split second, someone standing on my porch, waiting to tell me I was going to be published. Then I’d pull the phone out of my pocket, look at the header for the piece of spam that had just come in, and I’d try to keep my heart from tripping over the curb. One morning, the doorbell woke me with a single line from my agent that said, “Call me as soon as you wake up.” I did. She told me the news. Then I cried. It was The Call, and a doorbell will never sound that perfect again.

To pass the time while my manuscript was on submission, I daydreamed about what it must be like to be published. I’d probably eat nothing but strawberries and fresh tamales. I’d ride first-class on airplanes headed to tropical places where the water was clear. The sun always shone, unless the stormy weather was romantic, and then it thundered with a basso profundo that shook my perfect home’s perfect casements. I would have a closet full of clothes that produced delight in those who viewed them. I’d wear gorgeous hats. I’d ride in a limo and drink only Veuve Clicquot. (Now that I’m published, I’ll tell you secret. Nothing changes. I still hate the clean the litter box, and my jeans have holes because I can’t seem get around to buying new ones, just like before. But in the bookstore, there’s a book with my name on it, and I don’t really need much else to be happy.)